Overall

• [ ] Keep names up the whole time - move them to the appropriate side
• [ ] balance audio enough for next rough - Mono mix + EQ
• [ ] footage needs to be stabilized?
• [ ] slower pacing overall - can be longer
• [ ] when people will probably laugh, you have to wait a bit to bring in the next line
• [ ] overall message doesn’t come through
• [ ] add more narration - brooke to voice over more?
• [ ] more location shots
• [ ] separate montages for first and second vibe.camps
• [ ] more twitter energy - more banger tweets
• [ ] see if you can add more interest or levity
• [ ] a lot of overlays should just be separate screens instead

Enter the vibecamp

• [ ] Intro drags
• [ ] ask for more photos of vibecamp beds
• [ ] slow down pacing in the beginning
• [ ] contextualize “show me your paperwork” better
• [ ] Photo slideshows aren’t working
• [ ] brooke should be doing more at vibecamp in videos